Rhys. Like Liana you infer lots of things biut without the formality of identifying camera angles your work lacks the structure required for the higher grades which is a shame as the actual insight is there.Look at Matt's for an example of the formality neededhttp://matthewneedham.blogspot.com/2010/10/explain-how-ethnicity-is-represented-in.htmlAlso think about how to include theory like Barthes in your work.
Rhys. Like Liana you infer lots of things biut without the formality of identifying camera angles your work lacks the structure required for the higher grades which is a shame as the actual insight is there.
ReplyDeleteLook at Matt's for an example of the formality needed
http://matthewneedham.blogspot.com/2010/10/explain-how-ethnicity-is-represented-in.html
Also think about how to include theory like Barthes in your work.